Altaf Bhimji January 18, 1999
Tags: God , Ramadan
Two contrasting versions of Ramadan
1.
A new night
of the sacred month
the thin slice of the moon; the crescent
visible only a few minutes
to the naked eye
Greetings one to the other: Ramadan Mubarakh
And a few hours later
sounds of drums
Wake up! Wake up!
have a meal,
a simple glass
of water!
Before the first light,
before you begin the fast,
make the intention
Wake up! Wake up!
And the day progresses, a slowing down;
restaurants closed, coffee houses empty.
And workers begin their trek home early
Late afternoon, the speciality stores open
selling the special once a year snacks,
crowds flocking and moving hurriedly
collecting their Iftar (break fast)
And mothers prepare the traditional meals
taking extra time
for the fasting family
Only an hour before the sun sets
city streets empty,
as in a curfew,
And now only a few minutes,
family and friends gather around the table
making small talk
awaiting the moment...silence...
Allah-hu Akbar
Allah-hu Akbar...
And the siren, signalling the sun dipping below the horizon
And together, some with dates, some with a pinch of salt
"We take this food in the name of Allah, most gracious, ever merciful"
Prayers given
and later friends and family
mill around, some content
others tired, but all happy
on this day of Ramadan...
Peace
2.
A new night
beginning of the sacred month
the thin slice of the crescent
visible only a few minutes
to the naked eye
Awaiting the news, here, far away
in a land pretentiously secular
with In God We Trust
visited only on Sunday
Awaiting watching the Internet for the crescent news
And some calls made
Relatives far flung: Chicago, New York, London,
Frankfurt and Los Angeles
Yes! The crescent has been sighted! Ramadan Mubarakh!
Over miles and miles and miles of telephone lines
The masjid schedule consulted, and alarm clock set.
For the meal before first light
Work the next day, same tempo, same schedule.
The boss and co-workers: "Oh, you're fasting?" "Why?"
Not quite comprehending the beauty of a simple ritual:
"Come, we're going to see a movie after work; we won't make you eat"(!)
Going home, 1/2 hour before sunset
from the 9-5 routine, never ending, never changing
Arriving home, break fast with some friends
meal cooked the night before.
Remembrance of Ramadan in Karachi, Casablanca, Lahore, Cairo
and Dhaka
A mood somber; bombs, death, tyranny, and a circus of impeachment
A simple prayer; perhaps one day we will fast in San Francisco,
as we fasted in Dhaka, Cairo, Lahore, Casablanca and Karachi
And the fast is broken
and later friends and family
mill around, some content
others tired, angry, grieved
and all somber
on this day of Ramadan...
Peace
About the author: Originally from Karachi, now living in Los Angeles, I work as a Social Worker (MSW) with the L.A. County in community mental health.
A new night
of the sacred month
the thin slice of the moon; the crescent
visible only a few minutes
to the naked eye
Greetings one to the other: Ramadan Mubarakh
And a few hours later
sounds of drums
Wake up! Wake up!
have a meal,
a simple glass
Before the first light,
before you begin the fast,
make the intention
Wake up! Wake up!
And the day progresses, a slowing down;
restaurants closed, coffee houses empty.
And workers begin their trek home early
Late afternoon, the speciality stores open
selling the special once a year snacks,
crowds flocking and moving hurriedly
collecting their Iftar (break fast)
And mothers prepare the traditional meals
taking extra time
for the fasting family
Only an hour before the sun sets
city streets empty,
as in a curfew,
And now only a few minutes,
family and friends gather around the table
making small talk
awaiting the moment...silence...
Allah-hu Akbar
Allah-hu Akbar...
And the siren, signalling the sun dipping below the horizon
And together, some with dates, some with a pinch of salt
"We take this food in the name of Allah, most gracious, ever merciful"
Prayers given
and later friends and family
mill around, some content
others tired, but all happy
on this day of Ramadan...
Peace
2.
A new night
beginning of the sacred month
the thin slice of the crescent
visible only a few minutes
to the naked eye
Awaiting the news, here, far away
in a land pretentiously secular
with In God We Trust
visited only on Sunday
Awaiting watching the Internet for the crescent news
And some calls made
Relatives far flung: Chicago, New York, London,
Frankfurt and Los Angeles
Yes! The crescent has been sighted! Ramadan Mubarakh!
Over miles and miles and miles of telephone lines
The masjid schedule consulted, and alarm clock set.
For the meal before first light
Work the next day, same tempo, same schedule.
The boss and co-workers: "Oh, you're fasting?" "Why?"
Not quite comprehending the beauty of a simple ritual:
"Come, we're going to see a movie after work; we won't make you eat"(!)
Going home, 1/2 hour before sunset
from the 9-5 routine, never ending, never changing
Arriving home, break fast with some friends
meal cooked the night before.
Remembrance of Ramadan in Karachi, Casablanca, Lahore, Cairo
and Dhaka
A mood somber; bombs, death, tyranny, and a circus of impeachment
A simple prayer; perhaps one day we will fast in San Francisco,
as we fasted in Dhaka, Cairo, Lahore, Casablanca and Karachi
And the fast is broken
and later friends and family
mill around, some content
others tired, angry, grieved
and all somber
on this day of Ramadan...
Peace
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