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Ajab paagal si ladki hai (Anonymous)

Posted: Dec 5, 2007 Wed 10:03 am     Views: 575    Interacts: 6

Part I

Ajab pagal si ladki hai,
Mujhe har khat mein likhti hai,
"Mujhe tum yaad karte ho?
Tumhein main yaad aati hoon?"

"Meri yadein satati hain?
Meri batein jagati hain?
Kabhi khwabon mein aa aa kar,
Meri aankhein rulati hain?"

"Kisi khamosh rastay par,
Kabhi tanha guzartay mein,
Meri aawaaz ka dhoka
Tumhein chaunka hi deta hai?"

"Thithurti sard raton mein,
Tehelne chhat pe jaate ho?
Falak ke sab sitaron ko
Mere qisse sunatay ho?"

"Kitabon se tumharay ishq mein
Koi kamee ayee?"
Ajab pagal si ladki hai,
Mujhe har khat mein likhti hai,
"Mujhe tum yaad karte ho?
Tumhein main yaad aati hoon?"

Part II

Meri deewangi daikho
Jawaban us ko likhta hooN.
"Tumhein kisne kaha pagli
tumhein main yaad karta hoon."

"subah se shaam office main
chiragh-i-umr jalta hai
phir us k baad duniya kee
kaee majbooriyan hai jo
Meree chahat ke pairon me
salasil daal deti hain

Tumhein phir yaad karne ki
Mujhe fursat kahaan pagli!"

"Mujhay bay-fikr, chahat se
bharay sapnay nahin dikhtay
Tehelnay, jagnay, ronay ke
mauqay hee naheen miltay."

"SitarooN se millay arsa hua..
naraz hon shayad."

"Kitabon se shughaf maira
abhi waisay he qayem hai
magar itna hua hai
ab unahin arsay main parhta hoon"

"Tumhein kisne kaha pagli
tumhein main yaad karta hoon"

Part III

Meri deewangi dekho,
Ki ye likh to diya usko,

. "Ki main khud ko bhulanay ki
. Musalsal justjoo mein hoon."

Magar ye justjoo meri
Bohot naakaam rehti hai.
Mere din raat mein ab bhi
Usee kee shaam rehti hai.

Usse dil se bhulaoon,
tab hi uskee yaad aye na.
Main uskee yaad ka daftar
Liye phirta hoon har lehza.

Aur uske khat ka ik jumla,
"tumhein main yaad aati hoon?"
Meri chahat ki shiddat mein
Kamee honay nahee deta.

Bohot raatein jagaata hai.
Mujhe sonay naheen deta.


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Posted by inpursuit on Wednesday December 19, 2007 01:12 am
TY guys. Havent been too active on chowk. Therefore the delay. But the entire thought behind this nazm isnt mine. I just remembered it. And at the places where I had forgotten, I added my own lines.

Posted on insistence of a friend.

Posted by inpursuit on Wednesday December 19, 2007 01:11 am
TY guys. Havent been too active on chowk. Therefore the delay. But the entire thought behind this nazm isnt mine. I just remembered it. And at the places where I had forgotten, I added my own lines.

Posted on insistence of a friend.

Posted by karmendra on Thursday December 13, 2007 09:23 am
wahhh,,, waqai aapki deewangi aapki shayari me jhalakti hai.. kafi achha likha hai aapne ,,,, mujhe bhi likhne ka shauk hai lekin itna achha nahi likh sakta.. wow!!!!!!!!!
Posted by OPtimistic_Aadi on Friday December 7, 2007 12:55 am


PART I

How crazy a girl she is!
Writing in every letter of hers,
“Do you remember me?
Am I in your thoughts?”

“Do my memories tease you?
Does my talk keep you awake?
Do my eyes appear in your dreams,
Making you sobe?”

“Walking lonesome on a quite path,
Does my voice hoax you into attention?”

“In the chilly shivering wintery nights,
Do you ramble on the roof?
And to all stars of the sky,
Do you tell my stories?”

“Did your love deteriorate,
With the books?”

How crazy a girl she is!
Writing in every letter of hers,
“Do you still remember me?
Am I in your thoughts?”

PART II

Look at my madness!
When I write to her.
“Who toled that,
You are remembered by me,
You insane!”

“From morn to eventide,
Burns the life candle of mine,
At office; and after that,
The liabilities of life are many,
To put shackles in the feet,
Of my love”

“Mad! How would I have time,
To remember you then!”

“I don't happen to be free,
And see the dreams full of affection,
Neither can I get chances,
To stroll, wake and mourn”

“Its been a long time since,
I last met the stars; they might be angry”

“Yes, I do love the books,
As I used to love it before,
But it takes quite a while,
To finish it, now”

“Who toled that,
You are remembered by me,
You insane!”

PART III

“Look at my madness!
In replying her,
That I'm in a constant struggle,
Of forgetting myself.”

But all I want to acquire,
Fail miserably.
And her evenings reside,
In every day and night of mine

Her rememberance could only come,
After forgetting her,
But I use to carry with myeself,
The pile of her thoughts.

And a line of her letter,
“ Do you remember me?”
Never can decrease,
The intensity of my love,
It keeps me awake,
And doesn't let me asleep.
Posted by ijaz_gul on Thursday December 6, 2007 07:53 am
awesome. so simple and pure
Posted by OPtimistic_Aadi on Thursday December 6, 2007 03:54 am
Wow! very touching and brilliant! Could I have a try to translate it into english?...I'd love to do that!

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