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Recently by Optimistic_Aadil
An encounter!
Last night I saw a full moon
embellished in the jewelery of gold,
upfront in a backdrop; black,
as it poured its beams
which it deemed right
to negate the dark.
Intent on hiding the truth
an evil cloud threw a curtain
of gloom over the face of the moon.
It wasn't yet doom
as I could see some resolute
silvery patches resurfacing
the murky scene
every now and then,
before burying deep by the
vastly obscure skies.
The clouds laughed a malicious thunder,
while someone shed tears of sympathy.
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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Friday July 25, 2008 10:50 pm
So very thanx Quin!
Posted by quin on
Wednesday July 23, 2008 08:29 am
good personification - poet, u r good at this
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Wednesday July 23, 2008 05:39 am
Thanx kaptain! :-)
Posted by kaptain on
Wednesday July 23, 2008 03:00 am
The clouds laughed a malicious thunder,
while someone shed tears of sympathy.
the gist..
good one there..
deep and reminds of deserts..and lonely nights..
while someone shed tears of sympathy.
the gist..
good one there..
deep and reminds of deserts..and lonely nights..
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