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"Dawn of Freedom" [Subh-e-Azaadi] (August 1947)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008 Mon 05:58 am     Views: 942    Interacts: 3

--Faiz Ahmed Faiz, translated from the Urdu by Agha Shahid Ali


[These tarnished rays, this night-smudged light--
This is not that Dawn for which, ravished with freedom,
we had set out in sheer longing,
so sure that somewhere in its desert the sky harbored
a final haven for the stars, and we would find it.
We had no doubt that night's vagrant wave would stray towards the shore
that the heart rocked with sorrow would at last reach its port.

Friends, our blood shaped its own mysterious roads.
When hands tugged at our sleeves, enticing us to stay,
and from wonderous chambers Sirens cried out
with their beguiling arms, with their bare bodies,
our eyes remained fixed on that beckoning dawn,
forever vivid in her muslins of transparent light.
Our blood was young--what could hold us back?

Now listen to the terrible rampant lie:
Light has forever been severed from the Dark;
our feet, it is heard, are now one with their goal.
See our leaders polish their manner clean of our suffering:
Indeed, we must confess only to bliss;
we must surrender any utterance for the Beloved--all yearning is outlawed.
But the heart, the eye, the yet deeper heart--
Still ablaze for the Beloved, their turmoil shines.
In the lantern by the road the flame is stalled for news:
Did the morning breeze ever come? Where has it gone?
Night weighs us down; it still weighs us down.

Friends, come away from this false light.
Come, we must search for that promised Dawn.]


To listen to the poem (Subh-e-Azaadi) in its original Urdu (recited by none other than Faiz himself!), use this link please.


http://www.urdulife.com/mushaira/english/emushaira.cgi?fa_p7


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Posted by MeiraJ08 on Monday September 15, 2008 07:38 pm
Note: [We are in the battle for distinctions here, I do realize you may mean the intelligent use of rap for example, but then you would have to inform us about it -- I have read so much stuff here, that (rhymes, yes) is not all monosyllabic, and yet stings the page with non-intellect. ]

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Thanks for the comment. ; )
Posted by MeiraJ08 on Monday September 15, 2008 07:31 pm
Look how this builds up, with these ambitious phrases:

ravished with freedom, sheer longing, our blood shaped its own mysterious roads, hands tugged at our sleeves, what could hold us back?

and how after the crescendo, in the 'calm of the after' after the 'all yearning is outlawed' there is still:

But the heart, the eye, the yet deeper heart--
Still ablaze for the Beloved --

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How can you read this, and 'see' that it is possible and still advocate for 'rhyming words' -- must it not challenge us to produce something authentic -- or not at all?

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Posted by quin on Monday August 11, 2008 02:17 pm

thanks akcheema for sharing the link. Really enjoyed and lot more at that site... wow

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