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Naivete

Posted: Nov 23, 2008 Sun 10:27 pm Views: 365 Interacts: 7

In the clinking of coins
the whispers of love
are barely heard.

The glitter of gold
so aptly fades light
of the eyes, once endeared.

Sighting profits, little
losses of mere emotions
are never cared.

A naive still craves for
the love; devoured by
the giant beast of material.

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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Thursday December 11, 2008 09:19 pm

Thank you marryam! :)

Posted by marryam on Saturday December 6, 2008 02:51 pm

beautiful!!!

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Monday November 24, 2008 09:52 pm

*Faraz says* correction :)

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Monday November 24, 2008 09:51 pm

Thank you sir jee!

and Faraz say :

hum bhi kya saada thay hum nay bhi samajh rakha tha
gham-e-dauraN say alag hay gham-e-janaN janaN ..

Posted by viqarm on Monday November 24, 2008 09:10 pm

duniya ne teri yaad se begaana kar diya
tujh se bhi dil fareb haeN GHam rozgaar ke
(Faiz Ahmed Faiz)

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Monday November 24, 2008 07:27 pm

Thanx a lot, kashkin!:)

Posted by kashkin on Monday November 24, 2008 09:11 am

Beautiful poem Aadil,
A naive still craves for
the love; devoured by
the giant beast of material.

beautiful lines

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