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Recently by Optimistic_Aadil
- Like A Season Goes By ..
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- Translation From Pushto ..
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The Heart Spilled
It was ripe
with red, luscious blood
as it fruited
on a stalk of love, rooted
in the very soil
I've been molded from.
It waited to be plucked
and savored,
but a stone of indifference
burst it into a spill
of scarlet pain
which absorbed
into the very soil
I've been molded from.
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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Tuesday June 16, 2009 07:00 pm
Oh, thank you so much sir!
I'll get better when receive comments like these from people like you whom I really look up to.
Gracias mucho! :)
I'll get better when receive comments like these from people like you whom I really look up to.
Gracias mucho! :)
Posted by quin on
Tuesday June 16, 2009 05:33 pm
One of your best compositions Aadil,
Imagery and ideas mingling to create a choreography of sadness.
Your style crystalizing into its unique form. A delight to read.
Imagery and ideas mingling to create a choreography of sadness.
Your style crystalizing into its unique form. A delight to read.
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