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Posted: Aug 27, 2009 Thu 02:38 am Views: 211
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We are built
to be eroded
with the blows of time.
Now when I lose a piece
here or a chunk there,
I hold it tight, the treasure of
love, kept in the safety of heart
sealed with ego;
you don't hand time
the stilettos of your lashes
to exhume it.
Preserved, this love
will mock the vicious ways
of our fate,
that crumbs us to death
after luring us to life.
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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Friday August 28, 2009 10:13 pm
@banjara286 .. what if the heart itself is in the striking range? thats where preserving 'love' from the blows of time becomes the most difficult of tasks ..
Posted by banjara286 on
Thursday August 27, 2009 12:51 pm
the blows of time can be devastating indeed. but r we built to be eroded? with a sanctuary like our heart that no cruelty can permeate and subdue?
i wonder ...
i wonder ...
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on
Thursday August 27, 2009 06:40 am
@Goonga jee .. Thank you man! Ramadan Karim! :)
@Zina .. Oh, its so very generous of you! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks alot! :)
@Zina .. Oh, its so very generous of you! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks alot! :)
Posted by ZINA on
Thursday August 27, 2009 05:10 am
Aadil,
Absolutely hearwrenchingly beautiful! One of your best in my eyes!
'stilettos of your lashes'
I can't seem to get over that line and verse! It will spin and encircle me, this peom for a while...and many many others of this I am sure.
Zina
Absolutely hearwrenchingly beautiful! One of your best in my eyes!
'stilettos of your lashes'
I can't seem to get over that line and verse! It will spin and encircle me, this peom for a while...and many many others of this I am sure.
Zina
Posted by goonga on
Thursday August 27, 2009 02:42 am
wah ji wah shah ji: Ramzan Kareem! indeed!
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