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Posted: Oct 9, 2009 Fri 02:20 am Views: 100 Interacts: 6

The flowers on your

embroidered dopatta would

remain fresh,

(like the ones I would place

in your locks)

soaked in the midnight rains

of your eyes;

now, sighs, that formed

the thick rain-clouds

are no more to rise

as you trample the wilted

leaves of our blooming love,

evoking thoughts

of an autumn that came too soon.

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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Tuesday October 13, 2009 11:02 pm

Glad you liked it and I'm thankful for your kind suggestions for improving this poem! :)

Posted by quin on Saturday October 10, 2009 07:02 am

The atmosphere of poem is full of romantic anguish with beautiful expressive metaphors. Quite enjoyed the art, and of course, sympathized with anguish...

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday October 9, 2009 09:14 pm

Yea I like the beginning of this poem but am not satisfied with the end ;)

Its nice to hear from you :)

Posted by Delirium on Friday October 9, 2009 05:35 am

hmmmm.....abhi ishq key imtehaan aur bhee hain ;)
Sounds like a promising beginning though.

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday October 9, 2009 03:03 am

Oh, thanks! :)

Posted by mothsmoke on Friday October 9, 2009 03:00 am

Beautiful!

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