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Where Do You Stand ?

Posted: Oct 15, 2009 Thu 08:21 am     Views: 278    Interacts: 5

Here I stand,
Upon this pyre
My house,
as fire smolders out
From our actions
Of dishonesty and indifference
remain they distant in anticipation
Of disasters and break ups
Transport they themselves and our assets
Ours not theirs, to distant lands
From this house, as I stare
Here I stand, in reflection and ponder
Here he stands with his heart and mind.

Here I stand now with this man,
From days of the legend and bravery
Stop I will he says “all that has destroyed us”
Stop I will he says “all this isolation and injustice”
Not without your help, not without you
Come and join me, together we will
Create stories of magic and foundation
all that contains in our hands and minds
All that remains in those million prayers
Our time has come, our time has come

Find you will me with him now,
Together we will build this house,
From principles of justice and humanity
And to those who remain distant
In utterance “it’s impossible”
And words of discomfort “this cannot be done”
Remain they outside and distant
From years of plunders and loot
This revolution will come,
Our time has come, says he
Where do you stand?
Here I stand with him
Where do you stand?
Our time has come, our time has come!

Kashkin


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Posted by Ravi_Kopra on Friday October 16, 2009 12:14 pm
The message in the poem is more imminent than any 'beauty' of poetry.

Poetry is not less effective today than it was in the 'olden times' but it has to appeal to heart and mind to be worthwhile.
Posted by quin on Thursday October 15, 2009 12:43 pm
We hope - our hopes are often dashed, but we still hope - hope's unceasing song is source of many creations in the darkest of times. Thanks kashkin for sharing.

Of course poetry is one of many of our way of expressions, but has been most effective in olden times. The roles of various mediums of expressions have been changing throughout the course of history, but human's need for genuine and effective expression has never - and will never. An individual's connection to various art forms is another story.
Posted by ana on Thursday October 15, 2009 10:52 am
RK:

If powerful poetry in Urdu had some effect in putting Pakistan on the "right" path, it would have done so already. Poetry is beautiful, but as with our older poets, it has been used to support various ideologies' sentiments against one another, not to bring them together.

Poetry remains though . . . beautiful.
Posted by Ravi_Kopra on Thursday October 15, 2009 10:17 am
I think if the poem is written in powerful Urdu that appeals to the hearts and minds of Pakistanis, it will have some effect in putting their country on the right path.

I enjoyed the sentiments expressed in this poem.
Posted by ana on Thursday October 15, 2009 08:24 am
thank you Kashkin. :)

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