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Night! Another perspective

Posted: May 7, 2008 Wed 08:14 am Views: 284 Interacts: 8

Spreading its blackish wings
Strangling the beams of light
Casting a spell of hush
Ascends the spiteful night

To plunder a booming day
Must be condemned as unjust!
But am cluless to concieve,
What's the reason of this lust!

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Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Saturday May 10, 2008 02:00 am

Thanx a lot kash, for your worthy comments about the poem. Was just playing with the words when the thought mixed with it.

Posted by kashkin on Friday May 9, 2008 10:43 am

Aadil.
Its a beautiful poem as it deals with effects of night depending on interpretations and open questions…each word carries the parallel meanings and that is where the beauty kicks in…..well done and keep up the good work…….

kashkin

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Thursday May 8, 2008 04:39 am

Oye, my shweeeet bhai .... I'd glad to see you here ...
Thanx...

Posted by merimuhabbat on Thursday May 8, 2008 04:05 am

hey jani nice verses

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday May 7, 2008 09:59 pm

Thanx shobig!

Posted by shobig_sifar on Wednesday May 7, 2008 09:53 pm

Awesome stuff yaar. Loved it!

Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Wednesday May 7, 2008 10:46 am

Thank you sir!

Posted by Delirium on Wednesday May 7, 2008 10:16 am

Beautiful piece of writing

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