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Lake View Park

Posted: Jun 11, 2008 Wed 10:56 pm     Views: 257    Interacts: 3

The playful breeze
holding the reins of
tides either loosened
or pulled the strings

The pure white seagulls
dotted the all gray
waterscape, fluttering
and inviting sights

A boat with a resolve,
wrestled the might
of waves to
reach the shore

Somewhere a flute,
exhaled tunes
of Heer Waris Shah

The heart felt
a tinge of grief
looking at the waters
swallowing the
whole sun


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Posted by kashkin on Thursday June 12, 2008 05:01 pm
Hey Aadil,
Beautiful poem.I felt like being there after a long time with a view to hold in front of me and the immense beauty that surrounds this lake within the mountains...
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Thursday June 12, 2008 01:18 am
hamari kalpani may kashtian nahi chalti .. lagta hay rawal lake hi hay .. lol
Posted by goonga on Thursday June 12, 2008 12:49 am
yeh aap ki kalpana hey ya waqaee rawal lake pey aisa hi hota hey?
nice!

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