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To my mother!

Posted: Apr 25, 2008 Fri 01:16 am     Views: 279    Interacts: 19

When I was a child
I used to dream
of becoming such strong
so that to raise your stature
to the stars; you termed my destination,
yet I needed you to grow me up.
And when I've grown up,
I still need your prayers
to pluck those stars
and sprinkle it
under your feet
right where my heaven lies.


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Latest comments
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Sunday April 27, 2008 12:50 pm
Good for you. Keep us posted on the matches. Good luck.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 25, 2008 08:45 pm
Thanx kashkin! yes, whenever I'm feeling down in motivation, I look nowhere but towards my dear mother who's always there with her soothing prayers.
Thanx Delirium! you yourself are an awsome writer!
Ma'am Nadine! So very thanx! And tell you what, we won our first match with flying colors. Today we're playing our second one.
Thanx Pulchritude! for liking the poem.
And Thank you so much izuber! it is indeed the purist of the themes I've ever tried to pen.
Posted by izuber on Friday April 25, 2008 02:13 pm
Nice topic lovely theme and a good job in seeking janat, inshaAllah
Posted by Pulchritude on Friday April 25, 2008 10:47 am
simply beautiful!!
Posted by Nadeenahmed83 on Friday April 25, 2008 10:04 am
Hi Aadil. Sorry about Mardan. Your niece is very cute. Very good poem. How was your criket match?
Posted by Delirium on Friday April 25, 2008 06:37 am
Simply awesome !
Posted by kashkin on Friday April 25, 2008 03:07 am
Aadil,
simply beautiful..no matter what we do or desire it is those prayers and love we need from one of the most beautiful concept of this existence...our mothers....

very well written....thanks
Posted by bmk on Friday April 25, 2008 02:18 am
Mardan is expected to go pretty 'forward' just like Bannu did due to vizir-e-ala's & the likes' base. God-forbid, May be its the first...
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 25, 2008 02:10 am
Mardan, the erstwhile peaceful city is feeling the brunt of everything that went on around it. I wonder who the culprits are, especially when Sufi Mohammad has been released and Baitullah Mehsud has publically called for a ceasefire! A general consensus of the citizens reveals a hand of our very OWN establishment in sporadic acts of violance in Mardan.

May Allah keep all of our cities and towns and villiages preserved from all hazards!
Posted by ayesha5 on Friday April 25, 2008 02:03 am
Hope everything is fine in your hometown.
It's despicable... a few peaceful weeks have ended with this blast.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 25, 2008 01:59 am
Thanx a lot ZK! So kind of you!
Posted by ZK on Friday April 25, 2008 01:51 am
Beautiful!!!

Also salaams to the mother who has brought you up.

Regards
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 25, 2008 01:35 am
I was worried too coz the place isn't too far from my home. I'm in a fix who the hell has carried it out!

Let's pray for peace to prevail!
Posted by bmk on Friday April 25, 2008 01:32 am
cool,
hope its all well at ur home... sad to know about the blast in Mardan.
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 25, 2008 01:28 am
Thanx Shobig!

She's my niece, Abeera @ayesha!
Posted by ayesha5 on Friday April 25, 2008 01:25 am
Who is this cute girl? :-)
Posted by shobig_sifar on Friday April 25, 2008 01:24 am
touche!
Posted by Optimistic_Aadil on Friday April 25, 2008 01:21 am
Thanx ayesha!
Posted by ayesha5 on Friday April 25, 2008 01:17 am
Very nice! :-)

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