My Calloused Bare Feet…

Re: # 4

Don`t mention it bud! U deserved it! ;)

Regards,
Mayhem.

thanks alot may

I usually don`t vote 4 articles but I m votin 4 this 1!So, U can guess by now how much I liked it.It was wonderful.The accuracy of the words n the emotions.....IT WAS A FASCINATIN EXPERIENCE! Congratulations 4 writin such a GR8 article! I can almost imagine myself bein in his body,in his situation,feelin his agony.It is truly a masterpiece! Esp. the way u put all those incredibly accurate n beautiful quotes.

n 4 the ppl who think it`s crap,I wud giv them my most sincere advice 2 `TRY` 2 liv a day in that `Heaven turned Hell` n if they make it out alive,plz giv us a brief account of their `friendly` experience with the jewish army.

Again,THE ARTICLE WAS GR8! KEEP WRITIN!

Stop interspersing all those quotations. They turn your paragraphs into rubble and this whole piece into a disaster zone!

Well, perhaps you should not be blamed - there was not much theme substance to work with, anyway! This whole victim crap has been done only a million times before.

I know why the chowk editors keep getting so cocky about the ``new blood`` coming in - it makes the old blood look SO good.

But strictly by comparison!

the freedom that kissed the child..will never be free..
the land that embraced the martyr..is nothing but piling of rubbles..

unsettled and compromised..
this would go on..for time unknown..