Endless Knight

Beej,

Lovely article with prose that is poetically rendered.

Pl see my comments at #100 below Atlas Khan`s article ``The Great Wrong``.

Regards
V.S.Gopalakrishnan

I read it BJ. I cant describe the feelings the way u can but like a food taster do, I can say that this is a peotic look at the reality of this earth. The drudgery of everydayness and passage of every night......only to be broken by daylight.

Was this ur own or a translation of some desi literature?

...until the final night comes around and the eternal knight reasserts himself and claims his own – what is, was, has forever been, and shall forever remain exclusively his.

And who is that eternal knight? ... Surprise ... it is You!

BJ,

I read ur posts & like ur sarcastic language but I am yet to read this. Since Jang said that last 2 paras are good I read them. I agree.

For rest of the page I shud read that later.

wowy..very terse..loved the last 2 paras

one technical issues...snowstorm, a young fawn and cicadas dont seem to go together but i can see you need the snow for imagery, but by the time snow comes, fawns are maturish.

As always reading your stories is like watching a master craftsman at work.