Splinter

Wow..not even ten days away from Chowk and look what I`ve missed! Had no clue that this piece of mine had even been put on line yet (thought the length might be a bit off putting to Chowk staff). Thanks for everyone who has stopped by to leave a comment..really appreciate that you all read my stuff. Guys, I am a writer of strict fiction (aiming to be literary)n certainly not memoir-style essays..you can see from my bio that I am no Aaleen. All of echoboom`s comments have been deleted so have no idea what all that was about..but guess I missed some fireworks! Neembu looking forward to your feedback; I`m always keen to look at my writing through other`s critical eyes and in my world criticism is a good thing.

I HATE divorce

New biography: Hillary nixed divorce idea (Seattle Times)
Published 05/27/2007
Bill Clinton wanted to leave Hillary in 1989 but she worried about being a single mom and wouldn`t give him a divorce, according to a new...


Maybe it`s better this way: Student weighs in on divorce (Battle Creek Enquirer)
Published 05/27/2007
According to research the divorce rate in the United States has generally been going up throughout the 20th Century until its peak in the late 1970s. Since that peak, the rate of divorce has been slowly declining. Right now it`s averaging to one out of every two marriages. People that divorce have found that they just weren`t cut out for each other in the first place.


Divorce, politics and the Clinton ambitions (Times Online)
Published 05/26/2007
Bill Clinton wanted to divorce his wife in 1989 for another woman with whom he had fallen in love but Hillary Clinton forbade it, according to one of two new highly unflattering books about the former First Lady. The volumes confronted her 2008 presidential campaign yesterday with its primal fear: fresh allegations about her deeply complicated marriage.

To move from the concrete to the abstract and back again with such fluidity - without losing the flow of thought - is an achievement expertly managed by the writer. What an enjoyable read! Keep writing, Zahra.

#19

I agree. This piece is sensitively written. That commodity is sorely lacking among most chowk authors.

Most of the write-ups - especially of the Civic Center variety - slide like sand through the hourglass.

Making a grating sound, monotonic - and meaning very little.

Why are my Pakistani freinds here such hypocrites when it comes to administering ``justice``?!!

Why, why, why?!!

Perhaps the concept is alien?!!

#18 by hamidm2 on May 25, 2007 8:23am PT

hamidm2 stuff,

........ i think it is extremely unfair that you would think of fairness when it comes to mian echoboom but the fact that Ms. Sadna has been in the same slammer on apparently far flimsier grounds is absolutely no botheration to you. Or is it so because she is highly unlikely to steer the conversation between you and mian Tahmed towards tea and sex ....... no wonder the poor Indians are less than convinced of your ``fair`` credentials ........

#20 Only English fluent people matters in uSA .
The vernacular literature are not even noticed or appreciated

quality wise it (in urdu,)may be better`Afsana` or poetry

She writes well ...lucky to be in America

Re: # 19

Do you mean she`s lucky to be in ameica because she writes well? What exactly is the link between the two?

chowk staff,

........ i think it is extremely unfair that you won`t let echoboom participate in this discussion on tea and sex ....... no wonder the poor man is paranoid ........

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#13 Hamidm2

[making them a cup of tea...]

...EVERY morning!

For the rest of their lives.

I do believe that it is strictly an Indian trait, though!

Like somebody once said...

...bandar kya jaaney, adrakh ka swaad!...

Take a good look, mian! And try not to cry!

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bj,

........ only the queen and gay people make tea like that any more - the rest of us simply throw in a teabag into a cup of water heated in the microwave ....... anyway, i like my tea without milk unless it is ``doodh-pati`` - tea boiled in milk with sugar added (it is even better if you throw in a few poppy buds to make it ``dodian aali cha``)

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nice, well written ......... i enjoyed it, but i can see why echo`s wilted muslim manhood would feel threatened by it ........ it is bad enough that they have all the money and all the toys, but now they are coming after our women .......... as much as we love our sheep and camels, a woman comes in handy for cooking, cleaning and procreation without unnecessary foreplay and all that other nonsense like calling them `honey` and making them a cup of tea .......

there is something wrong with the narrator. sounds like a surrogate of Aaleen character trying to write her story in a third-person. Not to mention Aaleen seems very very much into arundhati-roy-like writing.


``but even those names have been taken over and absorbed into this country which leeches things from everywhere and spits them out indifferently.``

``I`m American, our names don`t mean anything.`` -- Pulp Fiction. [same idea, different tone]