Condemned Gods of Darrah Pir

Very nicely written. Pulled me in to the action, and kept me there. I loved how it started in the thick of things. Please write more. I meant it.

-thinking

A good piece of writing.....fires up imagination...would have been better if some references were provided to books etc on this rather remarkable but untold history our land...

Yes, I second thinkingstorm, you have a gift for the written word.....keep on tapping the key board for us!!!

Was there a concept of ``middle east`` 2500 years ago? King is talking about trade route to ``middle east``!!

Son, this was the place where our forefathers laid their camps before founding the capital, and here when the first stones of the city were laid who could imagine that it would be the capital of the great empire that will hold strong foot on trade routes to middle east and beyond and the access to the fertile basin of “Great River”, from here our ancestors extended their control over the mountainous tribesmen and even to vassals in southern lowlands.

Yea a mistake on my part , thanks for pointing out.