The Seasons

This is wonderfully written and very rich like a dark chocolate cake.

#2 Posted by saadmallik

My apologies saad..the interact page opens in a new window & somehow Saeed stayed in my mind.

These days one finds readership dwindling even for short stories written in prose, so I do not blame your daughters for being no different than any other children including mine.

keep writing.

Yes it is looooooooong! but I've read it completely and I appreciate your stamina and skill, Mr Saeed Malik, for composing such fascinating rhymical verses.

Aadil...

Thanks! If only you had spelled my name correctly, I would have been somewhat confident that at least one reader was patient enough to finish my story, which my daughter considers oppressively long and boring.

Saeed Malik:

That's real good..WOW a whole story in rhyme.
ECHOBOOM.

Look me up in my profile. thanks.