I can still remember . . .
Bilal Sulehri October 3, 2007
#3 Posted by MeiraJ08 on August 11, 2008 3:25:18 am
blue November,
a still-white cat
a cord-less phone,
I can still remember.
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I just wanted to see if I could get "November" to rhyme with "Remember" but I think you are the poet. What excellent rhyme-scheme, Chowk are THE publishers.
In the nearest language, it always works.
a still-white cat
a cord-less phone,
I can still remember.
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I just wanted to see if I could get "November" to rhyme with "Remember" but I think you are the poet. What excellent rhyme-scheme, Chowk are THE publishers.
In the nearest language, it always works.
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#2 Posted by zensufi on October 20, 2007 10:18:43 am
Turned you to Moses? Didn't see how that fit in with the rest of the nice poem. Do explain.
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