Nipa Chowrangi

Re: # 36
Kommen Sie in Ihrem Rasereieinwohner von Hades…. um

Re: # 29

Hamidm2,

Tahir is still upset with us for playing his sister like a banjo on our knees.

She is quite happy with the new lifestyle but Tahir wants to invoke honour killing.

It is a shame as she told all twenty of us that he himself taught her all she knew, and she had a good time in the process.

Regards

The US Elite

It seems that the authoress wrote this when she was in grade 10. By the way I used to live at NIPA Chowrangi, and never found an indescent family like this one in the story. Ha! I am just kidding; God that was one fukked up neiborhood.

Shandana:

The way you laid out the story, I do not think it is written for Aslams. Tender imagination is not for them.

Wonderfully written for the rest of us.

did she push him off the fifth floor.I think the thump was meant for him.tehmina should actually have chopped his dick and given it to Ifti.You conjure the Image of such a bastard and keep him alive.The symbiosis , the violence against women , it does exist ,otherwise such stories do not take shape.It also seems improbable to spot a boy holding gaze and spittig from the fifth floor at quarter past nine in the light of the lamps.
narrative is impressive,the ineractors on the forum suck.

Re: # 3 big deal lady. She could have just used a shot gun and killed that bastard. She could have chopped his balls and giving him a slow painful death. you are a squeamish old woman.

So what is new in the story? I can google and find 100s if not 1000s of similar stuff from days gone by. Life and feminism have moved on. You have not. Stuck in the 1950's.

Tahir, Tausendkunst ein Bündel mit wenig Verständnis der englischen Sprache. Wenn Ihnen um um " gebeten werden; was Ihr Pork" ist; Sie Kippe, die es bedeutet….Bumsen gehen schauen oben ein Wörterbuch Sie Schwein. Sie mögen zeemadarchod verdienen auch, das gebratene Spucken zu sein und verließen dann mit einem Apfel in Ihrer Schnauze.

Re: # 29 hamimdm2 Tahir mian is like a little gadfly landing every where to regurgitate the same old muck .

The man is jealous of other having achieved than him on FP!

May be you should introduce him to the joys of salami and Wine, and a Canadian Ham and Cider and or Whiskey! He will enjoy the civilising effect - it is in his character. Its just that he has not seen it as yet.

Ms Minhas an eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.

The stroy was great. There was something there for everybody. However, you did not build up the character of the women - she who shoved the husband of the building.

We as readers arrived at the article with a certain sense of revulsion for the guy. So really what you did in terms of increasing this revulsion was minimal. There has to be a real indication of the psychological scars on the woman. This was missing.

Finally, just because wife-beating is bad and we feel both naturally, and rationally mitigated to take a stance against it does not mean we resort to the baser instincts to resolve the conflict. Shoving the guy off the building is the first instinct, a very base one at that. Given the nature of the set up and the description of the middle class environment, I would have expected to have seen something more far reaching in the article (esp coming from you!).

Re: # 29

Go ahead, have all the pork ribs alone at the table; I don't consume pork.

Ta-ta

"Only your husband or an elder in the family can shed a brighter light on that."

as if there weren't enough male chauvanist pigs trolling around chowk

yahan to pathar uthao, tahir jaisi koi cheez nikal aati hai

Re: # 17
"Tahir miaN is highly jealous of your work"

The line: "Bangalore mouth so wide open I entertain the thought of staging a leveraged buyout of his two gold teeth" in my recent article might have been for the likes of you.....

Do turn sixteen quickly!

Re: # 16
Miss Minhas,

Thanks for the reply and the time you spent reflecting.

For a writer to allow a ten-year old profile to remain unchanged is strange indeed. My suggestion was to re-phrase it.

Editing is part of life; writer always do it but many CHOWK interators just cannot.

As for "shandana minhas aspires to create enduring works of postcoital literature", what can I say? Only your husband or an elder in the family can shed a brighter light on that.

Regards.

PS: do read #28

Re: # 28

tahir mian,

.... what is your pork ?

Re: # 15
Dear Miss Minhas ka sala,

I'm assuming that the lady concerned is a Muslim woman, and grown up too. If your ladies speak of themselves in this manner, I probably would not mind, but a Muslim woman?

We have excellent examples on our side, must we ape this smarty-pants (panties in this case) style so popular in smart-alec cultures. We have pride AND shame, more than you'd like to have.

If you prefer sleeping, go do just that. Many here have indeed risen from their beds and understood why I say what I say. There's no evil, no sala-ness, or whatever it is that you imply behind my interacts.

Sometimes when I bend down to tie my shoelaces, dogs run off scared thinking I'm about to pick a stone and throw at them! This is how simple it is--unless you insist on wet-dreaming about some jihadi threat.

You just laaaahve women crying about their 'ooh la la' problems in Pakistan, don't you? Mind your own 'naris in saris' please.

India tops the list of countries whose crooked men have stashed away over 1.3 trillion ill-gotten Dollars (that's right!) in Swiss accounts! Worry about THAT and stop jeering at us!

And read #18 again.

this would make a nice short film with the graphic visuals and the succinct plot, have a go at it shandana?