Wasiq Bokhari August 14, 1997
#6 Posted by amber on September 18, 1998 8:46:44 pm
doctor sahib,
`dekhna taqreer ki lazzat keh jo us ney kaha
mein ney yeh jana keh shayad yeh bhi mere dil mein hai`
Your poems are the fruits of an observent eye and a refined expression. Like a stone whirled at the serene lake of the mind, your poem is exquisitely and deliciously different. i`d only say that the nightclub concept is not new to me. I`ve looked at it for ages, but never looked at it that way! You`ve added a new perspective to a rusty outlook. It has a bitter tinge to its sweetness-the flavour that makes it a feast! so, when is the next poem coming??
best wishes,
Amber
`dekhna taqreer ki lazzat keh jo us ney kaha
mein ney yeh jana keh shayad yeh bhi mere dil mein hai`
Your poems are the fruits of an observent eye and a refined expression. Like a stone whirled at the serene lake of the mind, your poem is exquisitely and deliciously different. i`d only say that the nightclub concept is not new to me. I`ve looked at it for ages, but never looked at it that way! You`ve added a new perspective to a rusty outlook. It has a bitter tinge to its sweetness-the flavour that makes it a feast! so, when is the next poem coming??
best wishes,
Amber
#5 Posted by Faisal on July 30, 1998 2:52:51 am
Bravo! Bravo!
Just a niche; every line is not a sentence and still starts in capitals. I understand Brodsky is the only one who creates such syntax but not wholly so (a lot comes from translations). Is there a particular reason for this? Still, excellent poem- WAH WAH!
Just a niche; every line is not a sentence and still starts in capitals. I understand Brodsky is the only one who creates such syntax but not wholly so (a lot comes from translations). Is there a particular reason for this? Still, excellent poem- WAH WAH!
#4 Posted by temporal on July 27, 1998 7:55:50 pm
Yaar, maza aagaya!
What a surprise. How could I have missed
this little gem?
Dragging eyes by cruel hooks to altars of profane deities. Indeed.
Daring. Daring to see is the very essence:
the very difference between the few and the mutlitudes.
Those who dare cannot be blinded.
Nigah-e-shauq kay karishmay jaari rakhaiN.
What a surprise. How could I have missed
this little gem?
Dragging eyes by cruel hooks to altars of profane deities. Indeed.
Daring. Daring to see is the very essence:
the very difference between the few and the mutlitudes.
Those who dare cannot be blinded.
Nigah-e-shauq kay karishmay jaari rakhaiN.
#3 Posted by sabrina on July 27, 1998 11:40:00 am
You paint such a horridly vivid picture of
the clubbing scene;) It`s not all that bad!
Some very original lines I liked.
``darts of supermarket love fly,``
``annonting prophets, dragging eyes by cruel hooks
to altars of profane dieties,``
But why the profane for these dieties?:)
Very descriptive.
the clubbing scene;) It`s not all that bad!
Some very original lines I liked.
``darts of supermarket love fly,``
``annonting prophets, dragging eyes by cruel hooks
to altars of profane dieties,``
But why the profane for these dieties?:)
Very descriptive.
#2 Posted by BG on December 8, 1997 11:48:06 am
Hey, this is a great poem ! Who said no one responded?
#1 Posted by obaid on November 4, 1997 10:29:08 am
I agree. This is an excellent poem. I admit that I had expected something else
(:)) but what I got was even better.
The desert poem was also excellent but a little
dry (heh heh)
(:)) but what I got was even better.
The desert poem was also excellent but a little
dry (heh heh)
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