Amber Bokhari August 26, 1998
#3 Posted by wasiq on September 1, 1998 5:29:09 pm
Wonderful poem, beautiful. Keep on writing and hope to see your work on Chowk in the very near future...
#2 Posted by afrasiyab on September 1, 1998 2:48:05 am
Very appealing.
Khuda kare aur zor-e-qalam ziyada.
Khuda kare aur zor-e-qalam ziyada.
#1 Posted by slink on August 27, 1998 12:58:42 pm
a little bit too much like the lyrics to a boyzone song for my liking, but i do appreciate the fact that you are writing poetry..it is on of the last bastions of creative expression, which is why i think aspiring poets should make an extra effort to use imagery that breaks away from the norm. tone down the syrup, and we might have ourselves a good asian female poet.
shandana
shandana
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