Particles of Dust

PI:

...the `abstract` style is ok...but do experiment please...just confining to `one` style will not remove the `paranoia`... and it will be unfair burdon on your talents..

rgds,

t

tahmed32, puyu & ZahraJ, thanx for the compliments, I`m always looking for them :)

Urstruly, what `mardana` hobby do you advise? Jihad?


Fara & Farzana, what you regard as contradiction has been called ``the dichotomies of life`` by temporal :) These dichotomies exist. Apparently, ``Being thrown around by the wind, they look so weak, try breaking them apart and you`ll realize how strong they are. `` is a contradiction in itself, and so is ``They always pretend to be strong and confident, hug them tight and they`ll collapse into tears.``. And then these two contradictions contradict each other in a braoder sense. But thats how humans are, my role was only to observe and express.

Farzana, I always had a touch of `abstract` prose in some of my previous literary pieces, but with time I have become more and more paranoid and concerned about the virginity of my thoughts....I know this approach and this abstract style of prose sounds retarded, but then I am ``Paagal Insaan!`` :)

too zanana but chale ga.

despite a bit of condradiction as farzana has pointed out, i like the way you`ve used prose.

PI:

...enjoyed this slice of the dichotomies of life...

..t

not bad; infact pretty good!

enjoyed the expression about ordinary thing.

:)

Bilal

PaagalInsaan:
Dhool ka phool??? Interesting. Liked it, but was not the last bit a trifle arrogant? Okay, kidding...chalo...now would one have to apply the same standard to a particle of dust that ``shines``? Would it be less weak, more noticeable, and different?

Also, there is a contradiction -- ``try breaking them apart and you`ll realize how strong they are`` versus ``They always pretend to be strong and confident, hug them tight and they`ll collapse into tears``. Giving you the benefit of doubt here...perhaps breaking them apart and hugging them stimulates different reactions...wonder if the shining one reacts similarly:)

I agree with your explanation about using prose, but the prose could have been structured and punctuated differently. And I swear to you, the hymen would have remained intact. Just like a virgin....

soooo cute!!!!!!!!!

- Simple
- Sweet
- Insightful
and Pyari Thoughts

very nice, paagal sahib. Your humanity and good sense definitely shines through in your chowk posts as well.

Dear Ironman,
It is hard to keep the hymen of the original thought intact, when you process it through the rules of grammar and proverbs of language. I therefore decided to write raw thoughts in prose. It probably is something similar to the abstract art on canvas.

Very nice Paagal sahab.
Why prose though ? would have looked even better as poetry...u think?