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Break Up!

Neil Shastri June 25, 2003

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#8 Posted by warpster on July 13, 2003 9:14:51 pm
I thought it was rather well done, light and entertaining.
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#7 Posted by Syd on July 3, 2003 4:53:51 pm
I found this quite amusing.
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#6 Posted by Ansari on June 29, 2003 11:21:10 am
You know what? I don`t know why, but this is alright. :D Enjoyed reading it Neil.
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#5 Posted by Withnail on June 29, 2003 10:31:10 am
Honestly, you are more than capable of manufacturing a semi-believable narrative. That is clearly evident in this piece. Just need the right amount of tailoring. Scissoring off the unnecessary ends etc.

I apologize for sounding disrespectful earlier.
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#4 Posted by InvictusDeux on June 28, 2003 8:15:24 am
Hmmm,

Doesn`t seem to have generated very positive feedback. Well, guess I shouldn`t be posting such stuff any more? :)

Honest opinions are always welcome. This particular story wasn`t meant to be read seriously. And to combine withnail`s and moulabux`s comments, it was sincerely meant to be light toilet reading, i.e. the kind of nonsense you read in the loo.

Thanks for your responses. Will try to make amends in the future
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#3 Posted by Withnail on June 27, 2003 11:02:38 am
Excrement.
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#2 Posted by moulabux on June 26, 2003 12:02:45 pm
Partially agree with AJ : ridiculous.
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#1 Posted by meet_taimoor on June 25, 2003 12:50:30 pm
Nice!
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Interact Index

    #8 warpster
    #7 Syd
    #6 Ansari
    #5 Withnail
    #4 InvictusDeux
    #3 Withnail
    #2 moulabux
    #1 meet_taimoor

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