Break Up!

Neil Shastri June 25, 2003

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#8 Posted by warpster on July 13, 2003 9:14:51 pm

I thought it was rather well done, light and entertaining.

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#7 Posted by Syd on July 3, 2003 4:53:51 pm

I found this quite amusing.

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#6 Posted by Ansari on June 29, 2003 11:21:10 am

You know what? I don`t know why, but this is alright. :D Enjoyed reading it Neil.

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#5 Posted by Withnail on June 29, 2003 10:31:10 am

Honestly, you are more than capable of manufacturing a semi-believable narrative. That is clearly evident in this piece. Just need the right amount of tailoring. Scissoring off the unnecessary ends etc.

I apologize for sounding disrespectful earlier.

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#4 Posted by InvictusDeux on June 28, 2003 8:15:24 am

Hmmm,

Doesn`t seem to have generated very positive feedback. Well, guess I shouldn`t be posting such stuff any more? :)

Honest opinions are always welcome. This particular story wasn`t meant to be read seriously. And to combine withnail`s and moulabux`s comments, it was sincerely meant to be light toilet reading, i.e. the kind of nonsense you read in the loo.

Thanks for your responses. Will try to make amends in the future

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#3 Posted by Withnail on June 27, 2003 11:02:38 am

Excrement.

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#2 Posted by moulabux on June 26, 2003 12:02:45 pm

Partially agree with AJ : ridiculous.