Break Up!
Neil Shastri June 25, 2003
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#4 Posted by InvictusDeux on June 28, 2003 8:15:24 am
Hmmm,
Doesn`t seem to have generated very positive feedback. Well, guess I shouldn`t be posting such stuff any more? :)
Honest opinions are always welcome. This particular story wasn`t meant to be read seriously. And to combine withnail`s and moulabux`s comments, it was sincerely meant to be light toilet reading, i.e. the kind of nonsense you read in the loo.
Thanks for your responses. Will try to make amends in the future
Doesn`t seem to have generated very positive feedback. Well, guess I shouldn`t be posting such stuff any more? :)
Honest opinions are always welcome. This particular story wasn`t meant to be read seriously. And to combine withnail`s and moulabux`s comments, it was sincerely meant to be light toilet reading, i.e. the kind of nonsense you read in the loo.
Thanks for your responses. Will try to make amends in the future
#5 Posted by Withnail on June 29, 2003 10:31:10 am
Honestly, you are more than capable of manufacturing a semi-believable narrative. That is clearly evident in this piece. Just need the right amount of tailoring. Scissoring off the unnecessary ends etc.
I apologize for sounding disrespectful earlier.
I apologize for sounding disrespectful earlier.
#6 Posted by Ansari on June 29, 2003 11:21:10 am
You know what? I don`t know why, but this is alright. :D Enjoyed reading it Neil.
#8 Posted by warpster on July 13, 2003 9:14:51 pm
I thought it was rather well done, light and entertaining.
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