Omer Fayyaz December 28, 2003
#2 Posted by fara on December 29, 2003 7:08:54 am
Omer Fayyaz:
very well said. reminded of `sophie`s world`. hope to read more from you.
very well said. reminded of `sophie`s world`. hope to read more from you.
#3 Posted by temporal on December 29, 2003 1:21:36 pm
Omer:
With a tink
Another red bead falls in the bowl;
Life spreads its palm
And tells that, that was not known.
...perhaps what sits better here?...just a minor suggestion
rgds,
t
With a tink
Another red bead falls in the bowl;
Life spreads its palm
And tells that, that was not known.
...perhaps what sits better here?...just a minor suggestion
rgds,
t
#4 Posted by ofayyaz on December 31, 2003 8:16:41 pm
Thank you.
Temporal. I guess you are right. as ``voh jo ma`loom nahin tha`` translates into ``that what was not known``, ``that, which was not known ``(incorrect), ``that, that was not known``. yes, `suppose `what` suits. (I have corrected it with me).
Regards
Temporal. I guess you are right. as ``voh jo ma`loom nahin tha`` translates into ``that what was not known``, ``that, which was not known ``(incorrect), ``that, that was not known``. yes, `suppose `what` suits. (I have corrected it with me).
Regards
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