Thoughts, Anger &amp; other poems

#17 Posted by Mrinal on July 31, 2004 12:49:52 am

`Don’t Really Know Why` was really very nice!!

#16 Posted by nikki7777 on July 29, 2004 5:10:20 pm

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#14 Posted by rogues on July 29, 2004 7:13:04 am

thanx all !
i agree with nadia...rahul keep on writing...i like ur stuff.
also summaiya...
dont u sumtimes feel that society misuses and exploits the ``freedoms`` granted to them ?
thanx niran and capri !

#13 Posted by niran on July 28, 2004 12:11:15 pm

Well written in plain english with the beauty of words highlighted in every stanza...what can i say...it is touching yet the words are so far away!!! ahahah
Bye. Check mine sometimes....they call me niran in chowk. Alriight

#12 Posted by Nadia_Zehra on July 27, 2004 9:33:10 pm

For Rahulmal:

Rahulmal your poetry is inspiring...

Void but Fulllfilling, Dark but Seeking, Far but Approaching.

Really Lovely, Keep writing.

Nadia

#11 Posted by rahul_capri on July 27, 2004 8:13:38 pm

Raghav-liked your minimalistic style.

#10 Posted by Summaiya on July 27, 2004 1:47:24 pm

well written.

``Thoughts``, a close friend whipered to me, `` can not be controlled! ``

The beauty of tios poem is it`s simplicity .

I like the last three poems a lot i.e . ``Living words``, ``Don`t Really Know why`` and ``The Right to Freedom``.

I especially like the following verses:

``the setting sun
the brooding dark,
standing together
yet feeling apart.``

As for freedom of expression, i myself have come to question this very theory and law myself because some how it has been made the very excuse for being able to indulge in slander, abuses, spreading rumours, nudity, etc. In other words, according to me, defy morals.

A job well done.

#9 Posted by rogues on July 27, 2004 9:40:49 am

hey nikki
define `man` ...ur ideal of course

#8 Posted by rahulmal on July 26, 2004 11:44:29 pm

I try to fill,
the empty space inside,
by running with the winds,
by sailing with the waves,
by digging earth,
and splitting hair.

But the void remains,
and the search continues,

Will I someday,
discover my true self?

#7 Posted by nikki7777 on July 26, 2004 5:17:34 pm

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#6 Posted by rogues on July 26, 2004 12:36:20 pm

thanx garam_chai ! a very refreshing login indeed !

thanx huma_mir !
u r correct...but it is not just about internet
it is about modern life...and how we survive thru it.
we live off dreams and romanticise pornography.

hey rahulmal
i liked ur piece...but it left me incomplete
why do u recant ?
y do u erase ?

thanx Nadia_Zehra !
ur words of wisdom are always welcome...and always encouraging.
thank u.

#5 Posted by kaurasach on July 26, 2004 12:36:19 pm

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#4 Posted by Nadia_Zehra on July 26, 2004 8:11:19 am

Nascent thoughts - Enjoyed...

Poetry starts with joy and ends with wisdom..

#3 Posted by rahulmal on July 26, 2004 12:41:25 am

I talk,
and recant the words

I walk,
and erase the footprints.

I eat,
and spit the morsels

I command,
and beat a retreat

I write,
and erase the poems