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The Olive Trees

storyteller May 21, 2004

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#9 Posted by notme on May 23, 2004 12:06:08 pm
Is it just me, or do other people also have trouble understanding what Mr. Isphahani has to say?
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#8 Posted by M.B.Z.Isphahani on May 22, 2004 12:25:45 pm
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#7 Posted by Azure on May 22, 2004 4:35:42 am
Just last night I was wondering why the hell so many powerul nations across the world can`t even unite for one cause (that being the liberation of all innocent humans from torture and terrorism) and forget their internal problems for a while to make the world a better place. We are turning our own future generations into rebels, fighters, jihadis, heartless monsters by propagating violence and trying to occupy land after land with no respect for human rights. One feels quite helpless and stupid when you see all this... and we the common people can do nothing about it.

Nice work storyteller.
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#6 Posted by badtameez on May 22, 2004 1:05:24 am
But often in our one sided sympathies for the Palestinians, we ignore the human cost borne by the Israelis, and by that I don’t mean the security forces, I mean the civilians. What must be life to live in a constant dread? For Palestinians, not knowing when a missile/bulldozer razes their homes to ground, for Israelis, not knowing when a suicide bomber blasts him/herself apart, killing many more. Not knowing when a bullet answers a small stone. Not knowing when a knife stabs an unsuspecting passer by.
I read this book, Broken Bridge, by Lynne Reid Banks (http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0380723840/qid=1085209279/sr=1-2/ref=sr_1_2/103-8478763-3948602?v=glance&s=books) that so rightly captured an Israeli family’s anguish and yet the Palestinians weren’t painted in bad light. What you learn after reading the book is that not Palestinians, not Jews are suffering in Israel, humanity suffers, a bullet, a blast, a stab doesn’t bother with religious inclinations.
I don’t side with Israeli action but I do sympathize with Israelis, just as I mourn for Palestinian losses.
Its become such a vicious game, loyalties lie tattered on a blood stained ground, sympathies are dime a dozen, senses numbed and fingers trigger happy. In both camps.
All the while it makes great news copy; documentaries are made, features filed, photos of five years old lifeless forms plastered across newsprint…that’s what the Palestine/Israel conflict’s been reduced to. News. Words. Protests. Prints. And once in a while, heart-felt tears.


If you want to, there`s an interesting blog: This Normal Life (http://brianblum.blogspot.com/) for an alternate perspective into the conflict.
Rafah Kid Rambles (http://www.rafahkid.net/blog.html
or try this: Visions of Conflict (http://www.fotolog.net/regevn)
Ta`ayush.org is a site on Arab Jewsih partership for a donations campaign for the families whose homes are being demolished by the IDF.
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#5 Posted by Izzah on May 21, 2004 6:25:18 pm

Dear Storyteller,

A real heart touching story. It reminded me of a poem ``Tears of Blood``; the same is appended below:-

Sometimes tears have to drop
But too many tears turn into blood
Oh Palestine my ancestors’ land
Your earth has turned into red-colored sand
In it you have buried so many boys
Innocent, young still playing with toys
But their little hearts have turned into men
So fast before they had a chance to begin
A life like other men with family and kin

Born into their own country they face persecution
And live their lives full of confusion
Oh little boy playing with sand
Shot dead from snipers in your own land
Mother’s tears fall like razor sharp
Penetrating down deep with permanent scars

Oh world wake up his mother screams
Another atrocity with holocaust fears
Peace has been written in Rainbow colors
And doves are praying for all the mothers
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#4 Posted by M.B.Z.Isphahani on May 21, 2004 6:24:49 pm
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#3 Posted by storyteller on May 21, 2004 6:24:48 pm
temporal:
Palestine seems so far away. all we see are pictures of dead bodies and angry people. every once in a while we catch a glimpse of the human face behind the suffering and wonder what we will tell our grandchildren if they ask,``how was this allowed to happen?``
thanx for your comments.

rahul_capri:
i have been sounding like a broken record, haven`t i?
you are right. i have been dabbling in philosophy. sometimes i come across a truth that seems to repeat itself like some sort of incantation; in someones writing, in events....makes you think that there might be some timeless constancy that we are woven into.
never heard of ginsberg. my questions are
1)you can`t win, what?
2)you can`t break even, in what??
3)you can`t even quit which game???

hey, glad you liked this piece of work.
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#2 Posted by rahul_capri on May 21, 2004 12:07:50 pm
Storyteller.
You have a gift.Keep it up. One could not help but feel warmly for the strong current of compassion that runs thru.
btw, whats this abt ``everything being rigged in ur favour``?
I have read this twice from u already.
If u are dabbling in philosophy,
this might interest u.

Ginsberg`s Theorem
(1) You can`t win.
(2) You can`t break even.
(3) You can`t even quit the game.
Freeman`s Commentary on Ginsberg`s Theorem
Every major philosophy that attempts to make life
seem meaningful is based on the negation of one
part of Ginsberg`s Theorem. To wit:
(1) Capitalism is based on the assumption that you can win.
(2) Socialism is based on the assumption that you can break even.
(3) Mysticism is based on the assumption that You can quit the game.

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#1 Posted by temporal on May 21, 2004 9:24:49 am
s-t:

…deliberately understated and well constructed from the children’s perspective…

..kids need hope…(we all need hope)…it is hope that makes the challenges, dreariness, surprises and setbacks of life bearable…and it is due to the systematic and deliberate denial of hope by Israel and the short sightedness of the gross (and immoral and counter-productive) support for its policies by the US Administration that the Palestinian generation under Occupation is denied hope…is being denied dreams…to the point where Salaam is forced to say in utter despair:

I need nothing.
I need no one.
I just want to throw stones.


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