A Small Chappati
Aasim Khan June 26, 2004
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#5 Posted by AmericanFOB on June 28, 2004 1:27:43 pm
Very catchy piece. Couldn`t move my eyes off of the page. Didn`t like the way you ended it though.
#4 Posted by nikki7777 on June 27, 2004 11:19:25 am
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#3 Posted by hamidm2 on June 27, 2004 7:54:40 am
....... loved it !.........was it worth it?........... i wonder what kind of anal people sit around making these silly laws ............ at least you can get a bottle of booze past the goons at isb as long as you give them one ............
#2 Posted by Saminasha on June 26, 2004 3:52:41 pm
Plus the moral ambiguity of the piece is the kind of brave leap you dont see enough on Chowk these days. Credit to the writer for having narrator sympathetic, intelligent, Pakistani and law breaking at the same time!
#1 Posted by Saminasha on June 26, 2004 12:13:42 pm
This is pretty good. Clean, spare language, good time shifting. Stay away from the triple exclaimation marks.
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