Karachi Odyssey

Temporal, great way of capturing the picture, I see a lot happening in your writing. Kudos!

Mr. Isphahani, La hol wa la quwwat, so take care.

very thoughful! very creative!
and yet so close to life! in Karachi of course
that is the real magic of it
a pleasure to read!!!

Scary thought- what if temporal is actually MBZI????!!!???

Especially when he writes poetry, t sounds a lot like our learned, much travelled friend.

Awww c`mon, t, you know I luv ya :))))

Long time no see- chowk keeps rejecting my stuff, but after this your latest, I am inspired to keep trying. Maybe I should try some poetry as well

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Words
tumbling out
slip shod
hap hazard
stilted

Fingers
fumbling around
missing keys
swicthnig lettres

I have too much to say
I have nothing to say

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Cool huh? :))))))))

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CHILDREN OF DISSIDENT SOLDIERS

These are the pictures of the children of those soldiers who refused to point their guns at their fellow Pakistani citizens. For this ``grave crime`` and ``treason`` these soldiers are in jail for the past two years. Pakistanis! If you do not have courage to express your gratitude for their sacrifices, then at least say a silent prayer for them:

Hey Temp,
Missed you. are you back in Canada or still in Karachi ? I hope `M` is doing well.

``the key here
is not to look in the eyes
to talk as if addressing a wall
and drop names
this rudeness
opens most doors. ``

``been to palatial homes
elite clubs and hotels
easily this was
the most beautiful face
i had seen in the city of lights``

You captured the contradictions of karachi succinctly...welcome back T

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temp:
Good to see you back!
There`s a sweet-n-sour taste to it. But where`s the urdu version?

Beautiful, Temporal. I`ve read this 3 times already and fear I will not start to get all the little nuances after reading it many more times.

Temp.... nice to have you back.