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Aliya and the 3 Brothers

Padash April 10, 2009

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#44 Posted by raiya_23 on June 10, 2009 10:30:01 pm
Very interestingly written!!!
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#43 Posted by Padash on April 19, 2009 11:28:32 pm
Thanks hskhan! ;)
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#42 Posted by hskhan on April 18, 2009 2:28:08 pm
Padash,

Good girl!. It's nice. Made me reminisce about the days :)

P.S. Interesting conversation between you and urstruly heh
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#41 Posted by Urstruly on April 18, 2009 11:03:55 am
Re: # 40

True. A woman brings out the best and the worst in a man. A Woman is a powerful force in a mans life.
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#40 Posted by Padash on April 18, 2009 10:58:11 am
Guys should always be in flirting mood!
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#39 Posted by Urstruly on April 17, 2009 8:20:02 pm
Re: # 38

I had absolutely no clue that it was in autobiographical note. My comment was based on general observation.

Wrists are there to see, I'll show you if and when we will meet. I don't know when I will be in flirting mood next;). I am pretty unpredicatble even to myself.
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#38 Posted by Padash on April 17, 2009 9:15:37 am
Thanks Parmid.... I appreciate it!
Urstruly...who says this brown woman wants a rishta or a divorce. I am perfectly happy and sattisfied living a single life right now! How are those wrists by the way?
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#37 Posted by parmid on April 16, 2009 9:52:49 pm
Very entertaining fiction, Ms Padash. Keep up the good work.
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#36 Posted by Urstruly on April 16, 2009 8:53:27 pm

The problem with brown woman is that that because of her indiscretion she either doesn't get a rishta or she gets divorced. Either way she is the one who is a loser. The white woman on the other hand at least gets paid for her services rendered to man.
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#35 Posted by Padash on April 15, 2009 11:52:56 pm
Neembu..."chile" instead of "child"? Thats what Im talking about. Go on with your bad self ;)
Hermit...Thanks babe! Mean Girls was an awesome movie. I hated John Tucker Must Die.
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#34 Posted by Hermit on April 15, 2009 2:10:06 pm
Well, I was kinda feeling that I am reading screenplay of mean girl or John Tucker must die, except when you narrates psychology of teachers and some glimpses of FORBELS. I guess high school experience is same everywhere. It’s just the circumstances that dictate the human behavior. It was fun reading it. You certainly have the flare of writing and the observation.
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#33 Posted by neembu on April 15, 2009 2:04:57 pm
Re: # 32

oh please chile, who you trying to kid?
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#32 Posted by Padash on April 15, 2009 9:18:57 am
"satiric proficiency"? "tangential"?...seriously webster...life really aint that deep!!!
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#31 Posted by neembu on April 15, 2009 6:36:39 am
Re: # 24

why are you winking at me? and yes, if your prose is tending towards "tangenital" (eye roll), perhaps it's time to develop some satiric proficiency in other topics, miss potty mouth?
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#30 Posted by Padash on April 14, 2009 10:14:57 pm
I know yaar! growing up sux guys! Sure we were able to follow our dreams and do what we wanted but then we miss those love-struck nights lying in bed listening to FM 100 with an exciting future that lay ahead of us!
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#29 Posted by Fouz on April 14, 2009 8:51:33 pm
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Yeah. Sometimes its such a whole load of bull crap - this all grown up thing. I long for those days when the only problem on my mind was what to eat and what to do with the spare time. Girls? Well we used to have the neighbouring St Joseph's girls ride with us on the bus every Sunday. There was this half an hour time where we could mingle and well, oogle, at them. Since there were no cell phones at the time, chits were passed on and dropped in the bags. Used to call them kites! :)And I was the one who was asked to write some cheap couplets and cheesy sentiments in equally cheesy words for the testosterone charged dumbos!. Come to think of it, they fared better; they got those girls :(
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