Remember my sweet?

I was reading with all my warm tears in my my eyes. A very lovely job! Thank you Zee! Irina Guschina.

temporal, bilal, tahmed, taimurmalik and PM ... thank u...:)

temporal: the poem came to me in images, i merely wrote the words. i guess you can read wot u like into them. as for my homepage, i have been lazy there is a lot i need to put up and there r many bad links... www.zeejah.8m.com may be slightly better tho not updated either.

PM: i havent the slightest idea whom u r with in Ontario...and you are right about the capitalization, my mistake...

Taimurmalik: i have written other poems, some not as gentle and sweet tho!

Dear Zeejah!



The poem is too nice...very gentle..very sweet..

hope you write more often::))

regards,

Taimur.

Zeeejah, you might wanna have the `s` in ``sweet`` capitalized in the Title.

(And no prizes for guessing who I`m spending time with here in southern Ontario. :-) )

ooooh! Bey-beh!

...and just in case that`s misinterpreted.. Lovely stuff, Zeej! So refreshingly unpretentious.

Very nice indeed. A perfect poem to gently end the weekend and go off to bed, which is what I plan now to do.

Salam Zee,

I liked the poem.

Zeenat:

Interesting and different.

Tell me are you talking about life and death? Lost to the seas, the lovers are re-united in death? ``And struggling, my soul tried to break itself free.``

Or am I building to much into `softly` and `soul`?

lve

t


PS: Visited your page once. Let me visit again before posting comments.