Selected Poems

Nice selection. Keep writing!

Ras

Syed:

Cimmerian.
Derisive.
Persiflage.
Pensive.

There..... my feelings as I read them. Overall very synecdochic.

regards,

temporal


PS: Have you contributed before as Mohammad Ali Syed?

I was reading one of Zehra Rizvi`s earlier articles and she boasting about how she wrote it in 30 minutes and then revised it and sent it to chowk .... unfortunately being impatient by nature all the stuff I ever wrote including the one poem that these self proclaimed critics so passionately jumped to tell me was horrible (maybe cuz they didnt understand it... much like Ghalib eh )was written under 10 minutes ..... By the way Zehra Rizvi is really a horrible writer .... conceit is the cause of the downfall of many I will personally accept criticism from only Temporal ... the rest would be unwarranted....oh and on the side note ...... this is to the Hispanic Beauty that has hit me like a Thunderbolt ... Oh M I love you ....

Gentle writer,

One at a time, please! I find I do not do readerly justice to any, if they come so profusely.