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#26 Posted by Sheesh Naag on February 24, 2001 10:25:42 pm

Ref. the last two lines.

You too? I thought I was the only one, except mine was a yvesSaintLaurent belt, size 42``!

#25 Posted by jawahara on February 20, 2001 11:38:03 pm

Studebaker #20

Well, I embrace my weirdness, but I am definitely not queer. Not that I have anything against those who are, but I am not.:-)

I guess I like Shandana`s writing because I can relate to it, and perhaps, by extension her.

#24 Posted by Ras Siddiqui on February 19, 2001 10:40:10 am

Sad news of conditions on the other side at:

http://newsvote.bbc.co.uk/hi/english/world/south_asia/newsid_1178000/1178714.stm

Ras

#23 Posted by kirkit on February 18, 2001 10:28:57 am

shandana, angrezi bari jangli aur sangdil zabaan hai...angrazoun ki azaadi agar urdu main mila di jai to aik nai aur behtar cheez banti hai..

#22 Posted by zeejah on February 18, 2001 10:28:57 am

a mesmerizing read... u write beautifully!!!

#21 Posted by Asim on February 17, 2001 3:55:59 pm

Re: Paki style Mills and Boon

``...not to mention pointy breasts and hairy hands.``

I am kind of hoping that the bearer of the former does not possess the latter as well. It might be a slight put off, but given aour propensity to sit through Punjabi films, perhaps it is not such a big concern after all..

Yours concernedly,

Asim

#20 Posted by Studebaker on February 17, 2001 3:55:59 pm

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#19 Posted by Raw_Dust on February 16, 2001 6:43:44 pm

For me writer tries to masturbate(read it as glorify) his/her own inner something...

Confusion is such a darn killer.. sometimes..

Cartland meets David Flincher...

#18 Posted by SaimaShah on February 16, 2001 12:10:31 pm

Hey

Brilliant. Gorgeous. Wow.

#17 Posted by SaadPAslam on February 16, 2001 11:57:31 am

Shandana jee:

I am definitely concerned about you, but more so about people who may inadvertently become victims of a (your) ``meat cleaver``.

Regards

#16 Posted by hamidm on February 16, 2001 11:57:31 am

... tropic of cancer was banned in the US for over thirty years ....when it was finally published in the 1970`s it made henry miller, pervert and iconoclast, a very very rich man..... nothing has shocked civilization since then - not even a crucifix pickled in urine or a cow pickled in formaldehyde .........

......... let`s try something else - we do need a successor to ms. cartland

#15 Posted by slink on February 16, 2001 1:04:57 am

saadpaslam,

thank you for your touching concern about my mental health. as for your revolutionary idea of getting counselling if one has difficulty relating to ordinary reality, already done that. and apparently i`m a very well balanced personality, as long as i keep taking my medication that is..and stay away from forbidden fruits..and never leave my house. set hai.

shandana

#14 Posted by sac on February 15, 2001 3:54:31 pm

Shandana:

In general if the core of the story is well thought out, the incidental play on words and the cleverness that goes along with it only enhances the pleasure. Reading this story reminded me of someone`s apt remark its the unanticipated things in life that make it worth living. I found the gory theme ordinary(sorry :( ) but the side-dishes (

(Don`t) be afraid.

(Don`t) be very afraid.

Bop! Goes the weasel

)

were delectable. Maybe you should write with less thought and more abandon......

later

-sac

#13 Posted by SaadPAslam on February 15, 2001 3:54:31 pm

Extremely morbid!! you appear to be obsessed with a self-destructive fantasy of some sorts. Not that I am a psychologist, but I would definitely recommend some counseling!!

#12 Posted by Zehra on February 15, 2001 3:36:10 pm

slinky,

i am just *waiting * (barely breathing wala waiting) for you to write that romance novel you threaten/promise us with once in a while...

want to write one together...we can exchange scenes and piece it all together...romance paki style. lots of bhegee bhegee ahain and heavy heavy breathing. not to mention pointy breasts and hairy hands.

this piece had me remembering the first piece you put on chowk...vomit. i adore it (this and that).

also liked the name dropping in tft...you had me LOLling about.

rizvi.