Oh So Vicious

You gotta finish the story............... I wanna know what happened next please.. lol

What in the hell is this all about? Gosh!

this is nice....
Re#5

dont u know wut happens next??
lolz...
THEY move on..

nice to see you trying to put your experiences into writing. done a good job in expressing yourself. keep up the good work and do let us know how `the relationship` turns out.

Nothing to write home about because intro sounded more interesting. It just gets lost in between and sound like whining just.

``it was the early stage of a “relationship”. This is the period where you don’t sleep, don’t eat``

how true! ..Jawani yaad agiee...

excellant lines dear writer.

Re: # 4
yeah well... the guy could have been hers if they had a history, or a present.... with nuthin else going on, what can one but do? hehe, jokes apart, its fiction. im not a bad person, hehe, im not!

Ohhhh... and you had to end at the best partt.... what happend next? when the couple finally conffess to their friends, what does the best friend do?

You know when my friends used to say to me back home that `hey, that chick is mine and i like her` i used to delete her totally out of my mind no matter how hot or cool she was 2 me infact it`s gonna be lol for you but i used 2 make her my sister but atleast i am glad you felt bad though it was for sometime.

oh how typical...

what happened next?

excellent piece, very poignant. I know what it is to connect long distance with someone - I met this girl at a party one day in february and we smsed/emailed/telephoned and saw each other go through relationships for a year...

ahh... the frisson you get when you connect.

thanks

Now the `Kashmir Issue` shows up even in a `romatic` piece. :((