Warped

hi Samir Fayaz
good poem and and i think that its fight between eveil and virtue, and lie and true.
but may be i am wrong u don`t want to say it.
but its a good thinking to get any virtue.

hey there SAMIR FAYAZ
dunno wht u are emphasizin on..if you cld make it a lil clearer by tellin us wht are you tryin to emphasize on it wld make da poem even greater....

This is the kind of poetry that I guess anyone can read their own meaning into. For me, it worked as the expression of a stuggle at a crossroads, or maybe with multiple, conflicting, personality traits.

The meter was good. Lent istself well to the subject.

(No, I`m no expert on poetry-- not by a long shot!)

Thanks for sharing this, Samir. Look forward to more.

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