The Gardens I don`t understand how article of this quality make its way into Chowk. Aren`t there better authors....isn`t there better stories, ideas and so on...

The story has nothing. It`s flat...it`s tasteless and it makes me want to...ask the same question i already asked: ``How do stories like this end on Chowk?``

Blah!

Out of the Woods Yet The story is UNfinished. It lacks proper point or even satisfactory ending. It just floats in there, though i liked the way author expressed certain melancholic motions of trying to ask ``What is the point of life?``.

The story needs to have an ending or some kind of conclusion.

The New Wife lol

juicy :)

reminds me when i was 15 and my forty year old far relative tried to marry me.....lol

Western Feminism and South Asian Women ok many words, little meaning...

what`s u proposition?

Cold Flesh ohh...

wrong!

The Jews, Israel, and the Middle East u know i agree a lot with what u said...but i dont like you putting down others by insulting their sisters, mothers and so on...

that is just too low....

R Kumari: A slice of Josh Malihabadi\'s life I really find nothing beautiful in this story... a muslim guy chasing down hindu girl, blah blah...nonsense...

whats poetic about it?

An Unfulfilled Desire u are being selfish and spoiled...

more selfish..and i dont like the way u talk

The Interview i thought the story was a bit exaggerated...the only thing i could relate is that education of muslim girl...because my own mother didn`t care much of the last, i suffer feeling not equal to a man...so yeah..the point of the story is great...the way he tells it...not so great
otherwise its` ok....

What Drives Men and Women of Indian Subcontinent to Infidelity? very well written..touches some important issues and exlains why we cover our women....because our men are not of the purest material themselves...

enjoyed reading it

Di.

Am I Insane? ok Emma,

this sounds like something i had in the past...my advice to u is to leave him and try to find another man..even if he is not pakistani...any muslim...
if u husband has money which he does he will find lots of other girls willing to sleep with him and seems like that`s all he needs and thats fine...have self respect to actually do whats best for u...and leave him
if he is not willing to work on the marriage, why should u?

good luck :)

Dina.

Strangers in California oh my god it is AWESOME STORY

Kahan Se Aap Zamaney Ke Bad Aye Hain ``I got the best wife one can dream of and then a sweet little daughter. ``


I didn`t like this sentence. He talks about his wife as some kind of property...it`s like he is proving to himself that he can get the best of everything

:(

Di.

What Dreams Are Made Up Of beautiFUL!!!

too much perfection in the story...everything is too good and yes i didnt like the ending

Frankly Speaking LOL

really loved it :)