The Karachi Brides Re: # 4 Thanks for pointing out an article that takes on the topic similar to mine. This is to clarify that mine was an individual attempt and the "Brides on the Roads" that the article talks about saying it was published in Dawn, I must my title is a sheer coincidence because I have translated this article from an Urdu version I wrote for the Quami newspaper (published) about 4 years ago. So, clarifying any doubts of plagiarism.
Anum Ali

A Karachi Summer Re: # 18
Thank you. I am working on the piece for ALR

A Karachi Summer Re: # 12
Never meant it that way.

A Karachi Summer Re: # 17
You`re absoultely right about the part were the article meanders from the topic. I agree it was uneditted. It was just written and sent.

Dormant Embryo Re: # 1
Thanks a million. There is nothing better in the world than a good comment on poetry that comes from such personal depths.

Dormant Embryo Re: # 4
I do not know what made you feel the rhyming was planned because it just came to me naturally. Thanks for encouraging.

A Karachi Summer Re: # 1
Good to know this was an engaging read. It was meant to drag and have the dreamy feel to it. Glancing out from my window locked within my world, it was meant to be like that. Thanks.

A Karachi Summer Re: # 2
Thanks a million for the great comment on my writing. I like the constructive criticism but yours was a great motivator comment because I am a struggling writer trying to get stable with writing. I could always use some motivation. Thank you.

A Karachi Summer Re: # 3
Oh yes, I was being very pointing towards people and being very arrogant but that in intentional. I am giving an elitist view of a summer day something seen from a very lacking life experience point of view. But I don`t own the security guards or the Pajero like I received a critical comment. I appreciate the comments and thank you for pointing out the mistakes.

A Karachi Summer Re: # 4
Thank you for your comment on the article. It was supposed to attract controversy and I feel accomplished having done that. But I agree that the title is misdone it shouldn`t be A Karachi Summer, it should be A Karachi Summer from My 4 Elite Walls. I am new to Chowk, can you help on how to change a title for an article?