Nipa Chowrangi Well written, but then again, the idea of getting a point through doesn't really work out enough. Appears more of a remnant; yes that of a woman making her way out of her grave instead of someone been beaten the life out.

The point here should have been to put forward Violence in a way that it appeals rather make people sympathize with the character (Woman).

Nonetheless neatly written.
Regards,
Sardar Mohkim Khan